Down, | Beckenham, Kent. | (Railway Station | Orpington. S.E.R.)
July 7th 1879
My dear Sir
At last I send you (Registered) the proof-sheets of my Preliminary notice.1 I am disappointed with it & I fear that you will be greatly disappointed; but I have done my best. The style will require a little more correction, & I shall add a page or two at the beginning about the family in old times, about which we have discovered some curious particulars.2 Also perhaps another sentence on his advocacy of temperance—& on his work as a physician. Possibly I may strike out a few passages as too trifling, but this will depend on the judgment of some of my relations.3
The sentences in which I allude to your part, will of course be modified, after I have received & read the Translation, & settled what had best be done with your Biography.4 With wood cuts & additions, my notice will make about 150 pages. I feel sure Murray will not be willing to publish until the beginning of November.5
Two of my relations who can read German pretty easily have read your Article & like it much.6
My dear Sir | Yours sincerely | Charles Darwin
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