Down, | Beckenham, Kent. | Railway Station | Orpington. S.E.R.
Nov. 15th 80
My dear Romanes
I have just read your article.1 As far as my judgment goes it is excellent & could not be improved.— You have skimmed the cream off the whole subject. It is also very clear.— One or two sentences near the beginning seem rather too strong; as I have marked with pencil, without attending to style.—2 I have made one or two small suggestions.— If you can find my account in Nature,* (last summer I think) about the hybrid Chinese-gees inter se, it wd be worth adding & wd. require only 2 or 3 lines.3 I do not suppose you wish to add but in my paper on Lythrum & I think requoted in Var. under Dom. Vol 2. 2d. Edit, bottom of page 167 I have a good sentence about a man finding 2 vars of Lythrum & testing them by fertility & coming to egregiously wrong conclusion.—4
I think your idea of reference to best books & short history of subject good.—5
By the way you have made me quite proud of my chapter on Hybridism; I had utterly forgotten how good it appears when dressed up in your article!!6
Yours very sincerly | Ch. Darwin
I have had a hunt & found my little article on Geese, which please hereafter return.—
Please cite as “DCP-LETT-12820,” in Ɛpsilon: The Charles Darwin Collection accessed on