My dear Leonard,
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Please remember that I do not want more alterations than necessary. I believe everyone (I know that I do) falls into the error that any alteration seems at first an improvement Many times have I altered a sentence, and then gone back to the old form. Please make any corrections in pencil, or, if it be long in ink (if you like) on slips pinned to sheet But I hope that you will not find much to alter, as I took much pains over this chapter I am very much obliged to you for looking it over.
Yours affectn. | C. Darwin
Please cite as “DCP-LETT-8404,” in Ɛpsilon: The Charles Darwin Collection accessed on