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Marble & Stone Works,

G^t Smith Street,

Westminster, S. W.

Nov^r 18^th 1865

Sir

We beg to enclose a rough draft of the Inscription We have made the letters as large as it is possible – but we think if they are slightly reduced in size – they would look less crowded and better grouped

You will perceive that we have omitted “aged 72 years“ because it will require a separate line – and will make necessary a further reduction in the size of the letters – and as the words are not absolutely essential, we have thought you would not object to their omission – but they can be restored if you still prefer it

The Monument is in a forward state – the Trusses are carved – the Tablet is ready for the Inscription and the back ground is being carved and will be ready in a few days

We have the honour to be Sir Your mo obed^t Serv^ts

Henry Poole & Son

H. F. Talbot Esq

Please to correct the punctuation as well as any other parts that need it