Parkstone, Dorset.
May 3rd. 1891
Dear Mr. Westermarck
I think it will be very injudicious to conclude your work with as comparatively unimportant a subject as The duration of Marriage. The book is such a vast accumulation of facts, that few but professed anthropological students will read it through. It is therefore very important to give it a concluding chapter, a Summary of the facts & conclusions arrived at in the whole work. This will be the [2] only popular part of the book, and such a Chapter is absolutely necessary in order that the Reviewers may give a reasonably fair account of your work. It will be very easy for you to pass in review the various subjects you have treated, stating in each case your conclusions & how they differ from those of proceeding writers, & referring to the Chapters or [3] pages where the facts are given on which your conclusion is founded. Such a chapter will ensure good reviews, & in all probability double the sale of the book.
You might conclude with a few general philosophical reflections on the bearing of the whole enquiry on the future of marriage. You might perhaps be interested to read an article of mine in the ''Fortnightly Review'' of September 1890 [4] which incidentally gives my ideas on that point.
I see that a French writer has just anticipated your work. I saw the advertisement the other day, but I forget where. No doubt you have heard of it. It might be as well to refer to it, either in the concluding Chapter or in the Preface.
Yours very truly │ Alfred R. Wallace [signature]
Status: Draft transcription [Letter (WCP5033.5582)]
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[1]1 [p. 18]
May 3rd. 1891.
Dear Mr. Westermarck
I think it will be very injudicious to conclude your work with so comparatively unimportant a subject as The duration of Marriage. The book [2] [p. 19] is such a vast accumulation of facts, that few but professed Anthropological students will read it through. It is therefore very important to give in a concluding Chapter, a Summary of the facts and conclusions arrived at in the whole work. This will be the only popular part of the book, and such a Chapter is absolutely necessary in order that the Reviewers may give a reasonably fair account of your Work. It will be very easy for you to pass in review the various subjects you have treated, stating in each case your conclusions and how they differ from those of preceeding writers, and referring to the Chapters or pages where the facts are given on which your conclusion is founded. Such a Chapter will ensure good reviews, and in all probability double the sale of the book.
You might conclude with a few general philosophical reflexions on the bearing of the whole enquiry on the future of Marriage. You might perhaps be interested to read an article of mine in the »Fortnightly Review» of September 1890 which incidentally gives my ideas on that point.
I see that a french writer has just anticipated your work. I saw the advertisement the other day, but I forget where. No doubt you have heard of it. It might be as well to refer to it, either in the concluding Chapter or in the Preface.
Yours very truly
Alfred R. Wallace.
Status: Draft transcription [Published letter (WCP5033.5488)]
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