Down Bromley Kent
Dec 3rd
My dear Sir
I thank you for your extremely interesting letter,1 & valuable references,— though God knows when I shall come again to this part of my subject. — One cannot of course judge of style when one merely hears a paper,2 but yours seemed to me v[er]y clear & good. — Believe me that I estimate its value most highly. Under a general point of view, I am quite convinced (Hooker3 & Huxley4 took same view some months ago) that a philosophic view of nature can solely be driven into naturalists by treating special subjects as you have here done. — Under [2] a special point of view I think you have solved one of the most perplexing problems which could be given to solve.5 I am glad to hear from Hooker that Linn[ean]. Soc[iety]. will give Plates, if you can get drawings; but I suppose they might be drawn on to stone or copper. — Pray excuse me for again saying if ever you want £10 or £20, I shall be pleased to send it, for any aid in Natural History. -
Do not complain of want of advice during your Travels;6 I daresay part of your great originality of views may be due to the necessity of self exertion of thought. I can [3] understand that your reception at B[ritish]. Museum7 would damp you; they are a v[er]y good set of men,8 but not the sort to appreciate your work. In fact I have long thought that too much systematic work of description somehow blunts the faculties. The general public appreciates a good dose of reasoning, or generalisation with new & curious remarks on habits, final causes &c &c, far more than do the regular naturalists. -
I am extremely glad to hear that you have begun your Travels. (I thought your Glacial Letter9 admirably written); I am very busy, but I shall be truly glad to render any aid which [4] I can by reading your 1st Chapter or two. I do not think I shall be able to correct style, for this reason, that after repeated trials I find I cannot correct my own style till I see the M.S. in type. Some are born with a power of good writing, like Wallace; others like myself & Lyell have to labour very hard & slowly at every sentence. I find it v[er]y good plan, when I cannot get a difficult discussion to please me, to fancy that some one comes into the room, & asks me what I am doing; & then try at once & explain to the [5] imaginary person what it is all about. — I have done this for one paragraph to myself several times; & sometimes to Mrs. Darwin,10 till I see how the subject ought to go. — It is, I think, good to read one's M.S. aloud. — But style to me is a great difficulty; yet some good judges think I have succeeded, & I say this to encourage you. — What I think I can do will be to tell you whether parts had better be shortened. — It is good I think to dash "in medias res", & work in later any descriptions of country or any historical details [6] which may be necessary. — Murray11 likes lots of woodcuts — give some by all means of Ants. — The public appreciate Monkeys, — our poor cousins. — What sexual differences are there in monkeys? Have you kept them tame? if so about their expression.
I fear that you will hardly read my vile handwriting, but I cannot without killing trouble, write better. —
You shall have my candid opinion [7] on your M.S., but remember it is hard to judge from M.S. — one reads slowly & heavy parts seem much heavier. — A first rate judge12 thought my Journal13 v[er]y poor; now that it is in print, I happen to know, he likes it. — I am sure you will understand why I am so egotistical. —
I was a little disappointed in Wallace's Book on the Amazon;14 hardly facts enough. — On other hand in Gosse's books15 there is not reasoning enough to my taste. — Heaven knows whether you will care to read [8] all this scribbling —
M.S. can be sent by Book Post, if marked to be printed. — Had you not better register it?
Many thanks for Wallace's letter; he rates me much too highly & himself much too lowly. — That was an admirable paper of his16 in Linn[ean]. Journal. — But what strikes me most about Mr Wallace is the absence of jealousy towards me: he must have a really good honest & noble disposition.17 A far higher merit than mere intellect.
With cordial good wishes & thanks | Yours sincerely, | C. Darwin [signature]
I am glad you had pleasant day with Hooker:18 he is an admirably good man in every sense.
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